some virtual feedback: 1) foreground m's need a bit more connection to the back ground -- perhaps an in-between scale somewhere in there. 2) needs more tension. although the point of concentrations seems to be near the knocked out F, it's a bit unclear. 3) good. push scale shifts for drama and depth. 4)good. but, positioning of top U seems out of perspective line and we start to lose the sense of space. 5) needs work. think about the formal relationships between each letter. focus on the small moments within the composition. 6)good 7) good
some virtual feedback:
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2) needs more tension. although the point of concentrations seems to be near the knocked out F, it's a bit unclear.
3) good. push scale shifts for drama and depth.
4)good. but, positioning of top U seems out of perspective line and we start to lose the sense of space.
5) needs work. think about the formal relationships between each letter. focus on the small moments within the composition.
6)good
7) good