tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3990635832337270368.post2306214986912482535..comments2013-04-21T19:55:22.186-05:00Comments on Jessica Rojas: Experimental TypeJessicahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14916221331638788501noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3990635832337270368.post-92175252198995693412011-02-03T16:05:17.110-06:002011-02-03T16:05:17.110-06:00some virtual feedback:
1) foreground m's need...some virtual feedback: <br />1) foreground m's need a bit more connection to the back ground -- perhaps an in-between scale somewhere in there. <br />2) needs more tension. although the point of concentrations seems to be near the knocked out F, it's a bit unclear. <br />3) good. push scale shifts for drama and depth. <br />4)good. but, positioning of top U seems out of perspective line and we start to lose the sense of space. <br />5) needs work. think about the formal relationships between each letter. focus on the small moments within the composition. <br />6)good<br />7) goodMarty Maxwell Lanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00094001605998863744noreply@blogger.com