Must spring time fade?
Then cry all the birds and fishes
Cold pale eyes pour tears
Must spring time fade?
Cold pale eyes pour tears
I have my three final marks pinned down and ready to go, however, I am not completely satisfied with motif #2. I've created a new motif to go with this line that i feel better about, but I would like some additional feedback.
The line is: Then cry all the birds and fishes
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