Tuesday, October 26, 2010

Union Station Revisions

So, I've been struggling with the text on pretty much all of my poster, but it seems that this one, in particular, is giving me the most trouble. I'm trying to integrate the text so that it appears as if they are somewhat of an extension of the line studies. I'm not too happy with it, but I was hoping Jamie would see this post and give me some feed back soon. How 'bout it, Jamie?


  1. I love this poster!

    Have you tried putting Union" above, creating a split in the words?

  2. Ooh! I have not...but I will try it. Thanks!