tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3990635832337270368.post5829559885160201827..comments2013-04-21T19:55:22.186-05:00Comments on Jessica Rojas: Billboards Progress ReportJessicahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14916221331638788501noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3990635832337270368.post-36992005540680695762011-02-15T12:14:55.610-06:002011-02-15T12:14:55.610-06:00Jessica
Overall these are really busy. Think abou...Jessica<br /><br />Overall these are really busy. Think about the experience of walking or driving past one of the these. What would you be able to focus on, if anything? <br /><br />Why are you repeating patterns on each side, creating this mirrored effect? What's the meaning of that? I would work on simplification, creating a striking simple moment. Also, try some where the quote is just written normally, no tricks in the language. It would be good to try both approaches.Marty Maxwell Lanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00094001605998863744noreply@blogger.com